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My Universe, My Life by ~kurohana93:iconkurohana93:

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Disclaimer: I don’t own Twilight nor its characters Stephanie Meyer does…..blah blah blah yada yada yada

Please give me ideas for my story, I love Quil and Claire stories so much I decided to make one of my own.

Please don’t be rude it’s my fist fanfic



--Terms--

P.O.V.Point Of View

A/N Authors Note

                        THE BEGINNING

                           Chapter 1




--Quil P.O.V.--

I remember when I first saw Claire, the innocent two year old. She had dark brown hair down to her back, a slender tiny body, she had the most amazing, dazzling blue green eyes. She had tan skin and looked as if she was obviously part Quillett .I saw her and its like I revolved around her, she was my gravity, she kept me from floating away. I knew from that moment on I would protect her; I would be anything she wanted. I knew that eventually I wanted what Sam and Emily had, or what Jared and Kim had. But right now all I want is to be around her. I would do anything for her anything.

--FLASH BACK--

Emily decided she had to explain to Claire’s mother about imprinting, therefore Claire could spend her time here in La Push. I didn’t know much about Tammy, Claire’s mother.

Gahh!! What’s happening? Hurry up Emily! I think while I’m standing outside of Emily’s house.

Emily was inside talking to Tammy.(A/N-Tammy has black hair, dark brown eyes, dark tan skin, and is slender and petite) All of a sudden I hear a noise. Is that….laughter? I thought puzzled.

All of a sudden Tammy comes out with this evil smile, and Emily is looking slightly sad and frustrated. “Sorry Quil.” Is all Emily says. Oh god no. what if Tammy thought I was a danger to Claire, what if she never let me see he again? I would die rather than to be with out her. It sounded odd to me because I’ve only known Claire for less than a day, but I don’t care I just want to be around her.

“So Quil Ateara,” I swallowed hard “a little nervous are we?” she asked maliciously

“N-no-o” I replied with a stutter”

“Sure of course not, if you’re not nervous then you must obviously not care about Claire.”

“ I DO CARE ABOUT HER!” I growled at her

“Hmm a little grumpy today I see. I guess you want to know what I think about you being around my youngest daughter, my pride and joy, my reason for living” she said in a dramatic way “well first of all I would have to move from sunny Sacramento California to, uhh” she shuttered “ La Push.” she spat it out like a cuss word “I would have to sell my house, quit my job, move away from my friends” each reason was making me more sad and more depressed life with out Claire, I couldn’t do that.

“Not to mention her being around a werewolf all day, what would happen if you got hungry? Would you eat her? Or transform into a giaganto dog and scar her like Emily?”

“I WOULD NEVER HURT HER!!” I yelled. I was angry now, angry at Emily, angry at Tammy, and most of all, my self. And what’ s up with eating her?

“Not on purpose of course but by accident, that’s how Sam hurt my dear, dear sister Emily”

“I-I- uh…” I couldn’t think of a response

“Well I’ve come to my conclusion” I prayed silently that it would all work out “Claire will NEVER see you again!” my heart broke in several pieces, and those pieces shattered too. It felt like my world was ending. Emily gasped at her sister’s conclusion.

“HAHAHAHAHAHA” Tammy was laughing hysterically. She couldn’t be that evil could she? Emily and I both stood there staring at Emily’s deranged sister puzzled. “You hahaha shoulda aahahahaha seen hahaha your hahah faces” she said in between laughter. We were both mystified at the psychotic woman. After she calmed down she spoke again “of course Claire can be with Quil, I just wanted to see your reaction” she said still laughing slightly. I felt like everything was right in the world, my heart put its self back together. But I was slightly upset at Tammy.

“Tammy! How awful that was, I can’t believe you would do that to poor Quil.” Scolded Emily

“It was just so damn funny.”

“No it wasn’t”

“Yes it was. Anyway E I want to find out more about Quil. How old are you, were do you live, go to school, what do you drive, are you responsible, and what are you willing to do for my daughter, and what are your intentions with Claire?” she asked wickedly

“I’m 16, I go to La Push High, I can drive but running is faster, I fix cars though, I will be responsible around Claire, I’d jump in front of a bullet for her” even though it wouldn’t really matter I’d just heal right away “and I hope to be like a father, brother, friend and eventually my lov- errr umm wife.” God I almost said lover to her, shit I almost blew it.

“mmmmhhmmm ok sound fine to me. Just remember Ateara I’m watching you.”

--THE NEXT DAY--

“Ok Quil so help me find a house and I’ll move the day I buy it” my heart soared, I started looking for a house right away.

“ I found one! It’s a 2 bedroom house, it has a living room, kitchen, and dinning area”

“No what about Charri?” (A/N-pronounced cherry, like the fruit)

“Who?” I asked puzzled who or what the hell is Cherry?

“My other daughter? Claire’s older sister? The 5 year old right over there” she pointed to a little girl with jet black hair, she had slightly tanner skin than Claire and had dark brown eyes

“Oh…I guess I didn’t notice her”

“Humph” is all Tammy replied

“Fine, I’ll look for a different house” I searched more “how bout this? 4 bedroom, 2 ½ bathroom, medium kitchen, dinning area, living room area, both up and down stairs, small backyard, and its about 5 minute walk from Emily’s house.”

“Sounds perfect! Lets go see.”

As we walked to the house Tammy asked more about the legends I explained them to her. She asked about the Cold Ones, I told her the only ones around here are the Cullen’s, and the feed on animals. Tammy didn’t care much she just said that she wanted to know all about this stuff so she doesn’t feel left out. She told me that the reason she wasn’t worried is that I was there to protect her. Tammy asked me what will happen when Claire is 18 I’d be 32. I explained how I won’t age unless I don’t phase for a period of time. She understood. Tammy told me how she used to resent La Push so she left as soon as she was 18. She thought that it was filled with nut jobs, and that the elders were really strict. She left, she met a man named Frank. He was American but his family was from England. She married him at the age of 18 she also had Charri, also at 18. (A/N-that makes her 23 right now) She later found before Claire was born that he was cheating on her, she left him and he didn’t even put up a fight for the kids. He right now had zero contact with them. She also said that if Claire does end up with me that I better treat her better than Frank did to her. When we got there she look at the house and said,

“Looks fine to me, lets buy it.” I was so ecstatic that I felt I would jump out of my skin

It took a while to buy the house. But as soon as she did she moved in. that’s when my life with Claire started for real.

--END FLASH BACK--



This chapter is basically the intro to Claire and Quil. I gave background info and starting with telling how evil Tammy can be.

Please give your ideas to me for my next chapters. I have a plot loosely set. But that could all change with your ideas.

So PLEASE review. If you have suggestions feel free to leave it. Don’t be embarrassed there are no bad suggestions. If you give me an idea I’ll mention your name, unless you wish to remain anonyms.

Please give me Constructive Criticism. That ALWAYS helps.

But please don’t be rude or mean. It’s my first fanfic. If you think something in my story is bad then please say it nicely. Thank you!

And I hope I get lots of review. I REALLY need them

Thank you!

(So please review)
©2008-2009 ~kurohana93
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Author's Comments

Ok this is my 1st fanfic, i always thought that Quil and Claire would be cute.

Review would help alot. tnx

Critiquing would help alot! but please put it in a nice manor.

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thank you!!

p.s. im sorry if there are lots of typos but the one on the fanfiction.net is more edited

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~kibaluverx22 Jun 25, 2008, 2:14:15 PM
very nice! Quil is one of favorite Las Push Bots but my favorite forever is Jacob! U know what's weird though, I was thinking of making a story like this on Deviantart ecxept it would be Kacob imprinting on a girl his age. Her name is Kylie. If i ever put it up I'll yell ya K?

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